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Rainbows in a Somber Chasm by ~flyerxx:iconflyerxx:



I wish the world were a different place
that tears were not upon the face
of a mother who buries her child deep
into the ground for earth to keep

I wish that life were truly fair
that hate and intolerence were not there
to twist the souls of weary men
who take their lives and those of friends

I wish that some were able to see
the hurt in words they do decree
to those who may not seem to fit
with beauty deemed inadequate

I wish that money did not mean power
and that we were not upon the hour
of midnight on the doomsday clock
castastrophe... tick tock, tick tock

I wish the days did not slip past
like grains of sand slip through our grasp
but life is but a beam of light
whose glow doth fade into black night

I wish that more dreams did come true
that good intentions were not as few
as rainbows in a somber chasm
phenomena that which can't be fathomed

But in this life we get no wish
no stars to fill the black abyss
no genie to attain these notions
no magic spells or special potions

Life is not a fairytale
no sweet singing nightingale
We must become the change we seek
or look unto a future bleak...
©2008-2010 ~flyerxx
:iconflyerxx:

Author's Comments

I couldn't figure out which of the categories to put this in so I just went with spoken word... I apologize if I am incorrect for doing so...

... as far as the poem... I've just been feeling kind of blah lately... and I think that's what this poem reflects...

comments and critiques are always greatly appreciated... thank you for taking the time to read my words. :D

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:iconnathanarchist:
I am no great poet or artist myself, but by all means, please take this as a compliment of the highest regard. I can tell you put a lot of thought into each passage and how every line flows into the next. I look forward to seeing more of your work.
:iconflyerxx:
wow... thanx a lot nathan for your kind words... and for the fav... really appreciate it! :D

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Every man is more than just himself; he also represents the unique, the very special and always significant and remarkable point at which the world's phenomena intersect, only once in this way and never again....
:icondraculer:
thats exactly how i feel but you put it into words lol i love it =D
:iconflyerxx:
Thanx Draculer for your comment, as well as, for the fav... I really appreciate it!!! :D

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Every man is more than just himself; he also represents the unique, the very special and always significant and remarkable point at which the world's phenomena intersect, only once in this way and never again....

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